My Present Hour of Darkness
By: ~L
Pages and Pages
From all stages
From the small ages
To present as it engages
Left untreated
Secreted
uncompleted
Title a moment.
-pain
Title several moments.
-Inhumane
Leave me untitled
and call me Jane
There’s nothing left to explain
Nothing remains
It’s all in-vain
Everything remains…
.It’s vulgarly insane!
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if you want to listen to ~L read poem…
if you want all of my heart….
this was so darkly beautiful @L…
i sincerely hope that you come out your dark hour soon :)
I also hope you come out of your dark hour soon, that was quite beautiful :)
Thanks! It will get better… Someday… I pray hope will be brighter soon:)
This is so wonderfully sad.
I live the way you’ve captured that.
I loved listening to it … beautiful write :)
It’s short and brings out feelings and I like that a lot.
thanks my faithful reader… I usually cant pull out short… but this time i did… Thanks for letting me know your thoughts.
brilliant wordplay,
sad, beautiful,
be strong to smile and move on.
Many untitled moments – inhumane! I totally feel your pain…
You will rise again!
*hugs*
if there was cure to stop our pain, that pain that lays deep inside the core of our existance i am sure we wud be more happier…but i have found God and i have come to realize that the darkness isnt going to see me again…..this is only temporary its not forever…
powerful.
Happy Rally.
omg! I was just working on a poem about “janes” today – still debating on whether to post or not – I feel like this is a sign. great poetry, L. thanks.
Post it! :) I can’t wait to read it! :) thanks for commenting! And your welcome for the sign:)
Sometimes just the writing eases the pain a little just in the effort it takes to write. Very emotional and lovely.
Thanks for the audio, it’s always interesting to have the author read it out while I read it silently. Nice
… it’s a new adventure reading out load what I write… I think it’s good healing to speak the words out loud. Thanks for taking the time to let me know your thoughts:) … really Luke… I appreciate all the stops bye and comments! :)
I like this expressive piece!
I was for sure in the expressive mood… venting and a bit angry… Thanks for the read and taking the time to let me know your thoughts! :)
Such a honest true and from the heart poem :)
I can relate and so I love it beyond words :)
You are magic girl :)
:) … oh my dear, Thank you for being such an encouragement to me these past few months… your words are refreshing and kind:) Thanks so much for your support!
~L
This is superb! So heartfelt and sincere. The pain will eventually fade away… It always does! Hug for you! ;)
Thanks!
I love your writing style! (Great title, too, by the way!) I found your blog through seeing you comment on another blog and I’m glad I did!
Thanks Mollie! Your kindness made me smile today… and thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and letting me know your thoughts! :)
~L
Some honest and real sharing going on here today. Writing has always been a good tool for me to work through my dark times too. I wish light for you, L. xo
i enjoy the way you treat words. this poem is a delight to recite!thanks for share.
Thank you for your words! … it’s words like this that gives me the push I need:)
~L