Fading

Faded and forgotten
color dulled
soul shifted
and lost in their busyness

she remains unnoticed
she has become stuck in pain
scattered amongst here-say
while lies once again cover
acts of violence
as they minimize the crime
against body,mind and soul

faded and unnoticed
is where they left her
to be forgotten
and no longer remembered
treated rotten
to make it easier for you
but my God has not forgotten

vanished and pale
dismissed by your naiveness
and the easiness of silence

go ahead
turn your head
ignore injustice
at the cost of my
my expense
none of this makes sense

i am fading
fading fast
as I ask
how can this last
as it seems to be
a spell has been cast
as i fade into the past.

16 Responses to Fading

  1. This is great. Haunting…but great.

  2. “But my God has not forgotten”
    What a great line and what an absolute truth to be shouted from the roof-tops no matter what we have gone through or will go through.

  3. interesting, provocative, deep feelings, well worded. good job at getting your emotions out.

  4. an effective method of hushing up wrong deeds.

  5. Kind of haunting, yet very profound. Beautiful write.

  6. Truly haunting heartfelt piece, well written well done, I enjoyed reading this very much

  7. Beautifully written. I can feel the emotion of these thoughts. Nice one!

  8. I liked the way you turned an individual into yourself. I liked it.

  9. you make a sad experience beautiful and hopeful…

    poetic and stunning piece,
    Thanks for sharing.

  10. how sad!!! the past still owning the present :( a poor state to be in
    enjoy the potluck!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/07/20/emu/

  11. Your photos are always so pretty and fitting.

To all that let me know your thoughts... I appreciate each one. Thank you for reading all my Untitledmoments. ~L

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